Blooregard Q. Kazoo

He stood outside. It was raining. Cold. Hard. He looked to his left. A bleached obelisk stood straight, narrow; puncturing through a perilous sky. To his left was nothing; a ...

Right... I'm not even going to bother critiquing your grammar; too many mistakes to count. In any case, you also obviously don't have a clue what you're talking about. Maybe ...

The point about the unconventional writing style here does bring up another good point: you neither want it to appear forced nor pretentious, and in hindsight, I don't think you've ...

First! And welcome to the site, even if you have been here for a while :)

I forget where I read it, but my favorite writing tip is to think of a story you would like to read, then write it.

Welcome to YWS! It's addicting to be sure.

darnit, Lucy beat me :(

Wow! That's a lot info! I'm the first to welcome you! WELCOME TO YWS

kktoday is right. If you take the picture within or from a public area, then it is in your rights to not only take a picture of a house, but ...

First of all, here's a cool trick to get good answers on this: e-mail your local congressman. Go to to find out who it is then e-mail him or her. ...

Inspirational and encouraging. I can see why you would write something like this to put you in a better mood. I think I'll bookmark it so I can read it ...

You get points for passion, but you need to proofread this. Due to how short it is, there really aren't any excuses for poor grammar, especially when you spell "great" ...

Ceres for sure. How cool would it be to say you live on a dwarf-planet? Very cool.

Yay for post-apocalyptic stories! Don't know why, but I always get excited when I read "The Former United States of America." Although please don't get me wrong as the USA ...

I'm going to read the second part after this, though maybe not tonight. Firstly, I like the plot and the idea of a new evolution along with the idea of ...